Judy Gill
Director of the Writing Center
Instructor in English

phone: 717.245.1291
fax: 717.245.1942
gill@dickinson.edu



Judy Gill

Senior Writing Workshop

Course Description: English 404 is a workshop on independent critical writing, leading to a substantial (30-50 pages, 7,500-12,500 words) literary research paper on a topic of your own choosing, with approval. This paper may be a revision and expansion of your 403 paper or work on a different and unrelated topic. To allow time for revision, the full draft will be presented during three workshops over the course of the semester. You must meet all requirements (including deadlines) to pass English 404; English 404 is required to complete the major.

Course Requirements: You will submit in writing and present in class a 300-500 word prospectus. The prospectus should describe your project, including questions you want to explore; tell us why the project is important and worth doing; describe the range of your sources, primary and secondary; tell us about any critical/theoretical approaches you are thinking of using; and describe the three main sections or “chunks” you plan to submit for workshop. You will write your paper in three sections to be critiqued in workshop and in written comments; thus each of you will be a writer and an editor throughout the semester. On the weeks a section of your paper is to be workshopped, you are responsible for putting copies in HUB boxes and getting a copy to my office by 4 PM on the Friday prior to the Monday class. Each of you is also responsible for reading drafts carefully, writing line notes and end comments on drafts, and offering constructive criticism and suggestions for revision during workshop. It is crucial for the success of the workshop--and your own paper--that you meet all deadlines and participate actively in workshop. You must follow MLA guidelines for format, citation, and documentation.

Evaluation: Your final grade will be based on the following percentages:
30% Participation (written comments, workshop participation, meeting deadlines, revision)
70% Final paper

Workshop Groups:

Group 1: Nate Boice, John Gottshalk, Shannon Temple, Susan Westgate
Group 2: Jamie Kelly, Kate Leffingwell, Liz Rice, Shannon Smith
Group 3: Steph McKenna, Martha Mihalick, Dana Radulski

Schedule:

Monday, Jan 29 Discussion of syllabus, topics, assignment for next week
*Friday, Feb 2 Prospectuses due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Feb 5 Presentation and discussion of prospectuses
Discussion of previous 404 papers: topics, theses, introductions, and approaches

*Friday, Feb 9

Group 1 drafts and working bibliography due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Feb 12 Group 1 Workshop on first third of paper
*Friday, Feb 16 Group 2 drafts & working bibliography due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Feb 19 Group 2 Workshop on first third of paper
*Friday, Feb 23 Group 3 drafts & working bibliography due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Feb 26 Group 3 Workshop on first third of paper
*Friday, Mar 2 Group 1 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Mar 5 Group 1 Workshop on second third of paper
*Friday, Mar 9 Group 2 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Mar 12 Group 2 Workshop on second third of paper
*Friday, Mar 16 Group 3 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Mar 19 Spring Break--No Class
Monday, Mar 26 Group 3 Workshop on second third of paper
*Friday, Mar 30 Group 1 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Apr 2 Group 1 Workshop on final third of paper
*Friday, Apr 6 Group 2 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Apr 9 Group 2 Workshop on final third of paper
*Friday, Apr 13 Group 3 drafts due in HUB boxes and Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Apr 16 Group 3 Workshop on final third of paper
Monday, Apr 23 No class
*Friday, Apr 27 Final version of paper due in Gill’s office by 4 p.m.
Monday, Apr 30 Wrap-up and Celebration Time
*Wednesday, May 16

2 bound copies of paper due in Kelly Hoak’s office by noon
The Service Center will “velobind” manuscripts; please give them 48 hours.

   

English 214: Teaching Writing: Theory and Practice

Spring 2000

Required Texts: Anne Lamott, Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life; Richard Straub, A Sourcebook for Responding to Student Writing; Paula Gillespie and Neal Lerner, The Allyn and Bacon Guide to Peer Tutoring; and Diana Hacker, A Pocket Style Manual, 3rd Edition

Course Aims and Objectives: This course will prepare you to become effective responders to peers' writing within the Writing Center context.  We will explore the nature of academic writing in general and in various disciplines, examine issues confronting student writers, and discuss different strategies for tutoring in the Writing Center.   You will respond to peers' writing in workshops, written comments on drafts of peers' papers, and tutoring sessions with students enrolled in Professor Wendy Moffat's English 101 course (19th-Century British Literature) this semester.  Tutoring writing at the college level is a demanding but extremely rewarding experience. All of you come to this class highly recommended and carefully selected, and I look forward to working with you.

Course Requirements: Your work will be divided between reading, writing (and rewriting), workshopping and tutoring.

    Reading: Keep up with the reading. Occasionally I may ask you to submit, via e-mail, responses to the reading or answers to questions I pose about the reading. You will also be asked to lead discussions about the readings.

    Writing: You will write three papers, two drafts each (only the second draft is graded).

    Workshopping: You will respond to first drafts of classmates' papers, both in workshop classes and in writing. You will be responsible for photocopying and distributing drafts for workshops. Drafts with written comments will be returned to the writer at the end of workshop classes.

    Tutoring: Each of you will conference with students in an English 101 course twice during the semester.

Evaluation: Your final grade will be calculated on the following percentages: Essay #1--25%; Essay #2--25%, Essay #3--25%, and Participation--25%. Participation includes keeping up with the reading, engaging in discussion of that reading, offering comments and suggestions in workshop, providing helpful written comments, conferencing with students, and meeting deadlines (getting drafts to me and class members on dated listed below, turning in final versions on dates listed below). More than three unexcused absences will result in a lowering of your grade. All requirements must be met in order to pass the course. It is possible to pass the course but not be hired next year in the Writing Center if your behavior indicates lack of responsibility, maturity, and engagement with tutoring.

Schedule of Events:

Thurs, Jan. 20 Introduction

Tues, Jan. 25 Lamott's Bird by Bird

Thurs, Jan. 27 Bird by Bird

Tues, Feb. 1  Student papers (handouts)

Thurs, Feb. 3  A Sourcebook for Responding to Student Writing, pp. 107-128

Tues, Feb. 8  First version of essay #1 due (bring copies for members of your workhop group and for me)

    Workshop group 1:  Hannah Chemerynski, Amy Datsko, Amanda D'Avria, Claire Green, Olivia Hecksher, Nikki Hess, Andrea Jennings, and Erin Lawrence

    Workshop group 2: Jennifer Locke, John Loughney, Chandra Oursler, Elizabeth Rawitsch, Kate Sweeney, Nate Walpole, Abigail Watson, and Keara Wolak

Thurs, Feb. 10 Workshop on drafts of essay #1: Group 1--Chemerynski, Datsko, D'Avria, and Green; Group 2--Locke, Loughney, Oursler, and Rawitsch

Tues, Feb. 15 Workshop on drafts of essay #1: Group 1--Hecksher, Hess, Jennings, and Lawrence; Group 2--Sweeney, Walpole, Watson, and Wolak

Thurs, Feb. 17   Sourcebook,pp. 129-164

Tues, Feb. 22  Sourcebook, pp. 197-212

Thurs, Feb. 24  The Allyn and Bacon Guide to Peer Tutoring, pp. 1-22
                          Final version of essay #1 due

Tues, Feb. 29  Peter Vandenberg, "Lessons of Inscription:  Tutor Training and the 'Professional Conversation,'" The Writing Center Journal, vol. 19, no. 2, Spring/Summer 1999 (handout)

Thurs, Mar. 2  Allyn and Bacon , pp. 49-60

Tues, Mar. 7  Allyn and Bacon, pp. 93-118

Thurs, Mar. 9  First version of essay #2 due (bring enough copies for workshop group members and me)

Tues, Mar. 14  Spring Break

Thurs, Mar. 16 Spring Break

Tues, Mar. 21 Workshop on drafts of essay #2: Group 1--Chemerynski, Datsko, D'Avria, and Green; Group 2--Locke, Loughney, Oursler, and Rawitsch

Thurs, Mar. 23  Workshop on drafts of essay #2:  Group 1--Hecksher, Hess, Jennings, and Lawrence; Group 2--Sweeney, Walpole, Watson, and Wolak

Tues, Mar. 28  Student papers (handouts)

Thurs, Mar. 30  Final version of essay #2 due

Tues, Apr. 4  Allyn and Bacon, pp. 23-48

Thurs, Apr. 6  Allyn and Bacon, pp. 119-128, and Muriel Harris and Tony Silva, "Tutoring ESL Students:  Issues and Options," CCC, vol. 44, December 1993 (handout)

Tues, Apr. 11  Allyn and Bacon, pp. 147-156

Thurs, Apr. 13  Allyn and Bacon, pp. 157-170

Tues, Apr. 18  Presentation by Keith Jervis
                        First version of essay #3 due

Thurs, Apr. 20  No class--conferences

Tues, Apr. 22  No class--conferences

Thurs, Apr. 27 Wrap-up session

Final version of essay #3 due on Friday, May 5, by 4 p.m. in my office


Resources for Research and Writing:

Bibliographies:

    Christina Murphy, Joe Law and Steve Sherwood, compilers. Writing Centers: An Annotated Bibliography. Westport: Greenwood, 1996.

    Gail Hawisher and Cynthia Selfe, eds. CCC Bibliography of Composition and Rhetoric, 1994. Southern Illinois University Press, 1996.

Journals:
    CCC (College Composition and Communication)

    College English

    Computers and Composition

    Writing Center Journal

    Writing Lab Newsletter

    Writing Program Administration

Online Resources:
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    Freshman Seminar: Baseball:  Our National Pastime
     
Instructors:

Cathy Anderson
Department of Spanish & Portuguese
Office:  Bosler 217
Extension:  1722
Email:anderson@dickinson.edu
Office Hours:  Mon 1-2 p.m., Tues & Thurs 9-10 a.m., and by appointment

Judy Gill
Department of English
Office:  East College 410
Extension:  1291
Email:gill@dickinson.edu
Office Hours:  Mon 1-2:30 p.m., Tues & Thurs 9:30-11 a.m., and by appointment

 

Required Texts: Gai Ingham Berlage, Women in Baseball:  The Forgotten History, Marcos Breton & Jose Luis Villegas, Away Games:  The Life and Times of a Latin Ball Player, Jackie Robinson, I Never Had It Made:  The Autobiography of Jackie Robinson, and Robert Whiting, You Gotta Have WA

Course Description:

Baseball:  some names that immediately come to mind are Babe Ruth, Ty Cobb, Lou Gehrig, Joe DiMaggio, and Mark McGwire.  But what about the unsung heroes of the game?  Satchel Page and the others who made their name in the Negro Leagues; Miguel Tejada and other players who got their start in the Latin American Leagues; Dottie Collins and the rest of the women who kept the game alive in small towns across the midwest in the 1940s and 1950s; star players for the Tokyo Giants, "Japan's Team."  How have these players, and others like them, contributed to our national pastime?  We will explore the contributions of these players to baseball and try to re-define what we mean when we speak of baseball as our National Pastime.

Course Objectives:

The overarching goal of this and other freshman seminars is to introduce you to important aspects of college-level academic work:  critical thinking, effective writing, careful reading, engaged discussion, and research skills.  In reading, writing, and discussion, we will focus on the concept of argument and the construction and communication of effective arguments.  We hope you will develop your ability to recognize and critique the arguments of others and to formulate and defend your own arguments on the basis of evidence.  Though we hope you will find the subject matter of the seminar interesting and that you will learn new things about our national pastime, we are more interested in helping you develop the intellectual skills and habits of mind that will serve you well throughout your academic career at Dickinson.

Course Requirements and Grading:

Your course grade will be determined by the following criteria:
        Paper #1                15%
        Paper #2                15%
        Paper #3                20%
        Paper #4                25%
        Participation           25%

Each of the four papers will go through a drafting, critiquing, and revising process.  The grade on the final version of each paper will take into account the extent and effectiveness of your revision.  Your class participation grade will be based more on the quality of your contribution to class discussion that the quantity of your contribution.  Included in your class participation grade are miscellaneous assignments such as short reading responses, preparation of questions for class discussion, oral and written responses on classmates' drafts, etc.  You are also encouraged to participate by sending questions and comments to the class via e-mail.

Paper topics and guidelines will be given to you as the semester progresses.  For each paper, you will have ample time for writing the first version, for revising after workshops, and for conferences with us to discuss ideas, development, revision, etc.  You are encouraged to visit the Writing Center at any point in the writing process.  All papers (drafts and final versions) must be word-processed and meet standard format practices:  double-spaced; pages numbered; first page with title, your name, and date of submission; consistent citation and documentation style (MLA is the easiest).  Late papers will not be accepted, and plagiarism will not be tolerated (see the Student Handbook for the definition of plagiarism).  If you have any questions about citation (what should be cited and how), please ask us.  Our library liaison is Kris Senecal; she will meet with us once or twice during the semester to talk about research and about resources available in the library and online.  Our linked Writing Center consultant is Adam Knor. We encourage you to make use of their knowledge, expertise, and willingness to help you in this seminar, particularly with your research and writing. We also hope you will come see us or email us with questions or concerns about any aspect of the seminar.

The two sections of the seminar will occasionally get together to watch films (possibly A League of Their Own, Mr. Baseball, and segments of the Ken Burns' PBS baseball series) and to attend a field trip to the National Baseball Hall of Fame in Cooperstown, NY.

Course Schedule:

Sat, Aug 28        First class meeting 1:30-3:30 p.m.
                            Anderson's class meets in Bosler 305
                            Gill's class meets in Denny 212

Mon, Aug 30      Second class meeting 10:30 a.m.-noon
                            Diagnostic writing exercise due
 
Wed, Sept 1        Women in baseball

Fri, Sept 3            Berlage

Mon, Sept 6         Berlage

Wed, Sept 8         Berlage
                             Film:  A League of Their Own

Fri, Sept 10          Berlage

Mon, Sept 13       First version of paper #1 due

Wed, Sept 15       Writing Groups

Fri, Sept 17          Writing Groups

Mon, Sept 20        African Americans in baseball

Wed, Sept 22        Final version of paper #1 due

Fri, Sept 24          Robinson

Mon, Sept 27       Robinson

Wed, Sept 29       Robinson

Fri, Oct 1             Robinson

Mon, Oct 4          First version of paper #2 due

Wed, Oct 6          Writing Groups

Fri, Oct 8             Writing Groups
                             Anderson:  No class

Mon, Oct 11         Latins in baseball

Wed, Oct 13         Final version of paper #2 due
                             Common Hour:  "A Branch Grows in Brooklyn," show about Branch Rickey

Fri, Oct 15            Midterm Pause

Mon, Oct 18         Breton & Villegas
                             Anderson:  No class

Wed, Oct 20         Breton & Villegas

Fri, Oct 22            Breton & Villegas

Mon, Oct 25         Breton & Villegas

Wed, Oct 27         First version of paper #3 due

Fri, Oct 29            Gill:  No class

Mon, Nov 1          Writing Groups

Wed, Nov 3          Writing Groups

Fri, Nov 5             Baseball in Japan:  Whiting

Mon, Nov 8          Whiting
                              Final version of paper #3 due

Wed, Nov 10        Whiting (one seminar will meet in library today)

Fri, Nov 12           Whiting (one seminar will meet in library today)

Mon, Nov 15         No class--research and writing time

Wed, Nov 17         Film:  Mr. Baseball

Fri, Nov 19           No class--research & writing time

Mon, Nov 22         No class--research & writing time

Wed, Nov 24         Thanksgiving Vacation

Fri, Nov 26            Thanksgiving Vacation

Mon, Nov 29          Writing Groups

Wed, Dec 1             Writing Groups

Fri, Dec 3                Final version of paper #4 due

Some Useful Online Resources for Research and Writing:

Waidner & Spahr Library Resources

Resources for Research and Writing

Purdue University Online Writing Lab

APA Format for Citing Sources--Purdue

MLA Format for Citing Sources--Purdue

Bibliographic Formats for Citing Electronic Information

Citation Formats for Internet Sources--Emory

Research and Documentation in the Electronic Age--Diana Hacker

Internet Sources of Information--from Carol Clark Powell's A Student's Guide to the Internet, 2nd ed.

Baseball Web Sites:

ESPN.Go Network

CNNSI

ABC Sports

The National Baseball Hall of Fame and Museum

The Baseball Writing Hall of Fame

Baseball Bibliographies

Fastball:  The baseball site for Major League Baseball Fans

Baseball.About.com

Individual baseball teams' websites
 
 

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  English 212:  Writing About Sports
Judy Gill                                                                    Office:  East College 410
Fall 1999                                                                    Extension:  1291
Email:  gill@dickinson.edu
Required Text: Bill Littlefield, ed., The Best American Sports Writing 1998
Course Description:
In this course, we will read and discuss selected articles and essays on a variety of sports (football, baseball, basketball, boxing, golf, tennis and volleyball, among others) and write four essays (a personal essay, a profile, an opinion piece, and a research-based analysis).  In addition to the readings I will assign, you will provide articles and essays on sports taken from magazines, newspapers, or the Internet that you find interesting and provocative.  The essays you write will not be journalistic accounts of specific athletic events, but rather essays of the kind found in the readings, pieces that appear in such magazines as Sports Illustrated, The Sporting News, ESPN:  The Magazine, Esquire, GQ, The New Yorker, and Outside.  For topics, you may choose among individual and team sports, amateur and professional sports, and local, national, or international sports.
Course Requirements and Grading:
Your course  grade will be determined according to the following criteria:
     Paper #1          15%
     Paper #2          15%
     Paper #3          15%
     Paper #4          30%
     Participation     25%
Each of the four papers will go through a drafting, critiquing, and revising process.  The grade on the final version of each paper will take into account the extent and effectiveness of your revision.  Included in class participation are contribution to class discussion and miscellaneous assignments such as short reading responses, preparation of questions for class discussion, oral and written responses on classmates' drafts, etc.  You are also encouraged to participate by sending discussion questions and comments to the class via e-mail.
Paper topics and guidelines will be given to you as the semester progresses.  For each paper, you will have ample time for writing the first version, for revising after writing workshops, and for meeting with me to discuss ideas, development, revision, etc.  You are encouraged to visit the Writing Center at any point in the writing process.  All papers (first and final versions) must be word-processed and meet standard format practices:  double-spaced; pages numbered, first page with title, your name, and date of submission; consistent citation and documentation style (MLA is the easiest).  Late papers will not be accepted, and plagiarism will not be tolerated (see the Student Handbook for the definition of plagiarism).  If you have any questions about citation (what should be cited and how), please ask me.
Course Schedule:
Wed, Sept. 1   Introduction
Fri, Sept. 3   Writing Exercise due
Mon, Sept. 6   Elwood Reid, "My Body, My Weapon, My Shame," Best American, pp. 118-131
Wed, Sept. 8   Bruce McCall, "The Case Against Golf," Best American, pp. 182-191
Fri, Sept. 10   Steve Marantz, "A Man's Appreciation for Women Athletes," Best American, pp. 376-387
Mon, Sept. 13   Handouts
Wed, Sept. 15  First version of paper #1 due
Fri, Sept. 17   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Mon, Sept. 20   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Wed, Sept. 22   Linda Robertson, "On Planet Venus," Best American, pp. 77-93
Fri, Sept. 24   Tom Boswell, "Late Bloomer," Best American, pp. 302-317
Mon, Sept. 27   Final version of paper #1 due
Wed, Sept. 29   Charles Pierce, "The Man.  Amen,"  Best American, pp. 165-181
Fri, Oct. 1   David Remnick, "Kid Dynamite Blows Up," Best American, pp. 332-357
Mon, Oct. 4   Handouts
Wed, Oct. 6   First version of paper #2 due
Fri, Oct. 8   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Mon, Oct. 11   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Wed, Oct. 13   Handouts
Fri, Oct. 15   Midterm Pause
Mon, Oct. 18   Handouts
Wed, Oct. 20   Final version of paper #2 due
Fri, Oct. 22   Handouts
Mon, Oct. 25   Handouts
Wed, Oct. 27   Handouts
Fri, Oct. 29   No class
Mon, Nov. 1   First version of paper #3 due
Wed, Nov. 3   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Fri, Nov. 5   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Mon, Nov. 8   Tim Layden, "The Hustle,"  Best American, pp.  199-216
Wed, Nov. 10   Tom Seabrook, "Tackling the Competition,"  Best American, pp. 258-274
Fri, Nov. 12   Johnette Howard and Lester Munson, "Betrayal of Trust," Best American, pp. 358-375
Mon, Nov. 15   Final version of paper #3 due
Wed, Nov. 17   Handouts
Fri, Nov. 19   Handouts
Mon, Nov. 22   No class--research and writing time
Wed, Nov. 24   Thanksgiving Vacation
Fri, Nov. 26   Thanksgiving Vacation
Mon, Nov. 29   No class--research and writing time
Wed, Dec. 1   No class--research and writing time
Fri, Dec. 3   First version of paper #4 due
Mon, Dec. 6   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Wed, Dec. 8   Peer Writing Workshop Groups
Fri, Dec. 10   Wrap-up
Wed, Dec. 15   Final version of paper #4 due in my office by 4 p.m.
Useful Websites for Research and Writing
Waidner & Spahr Library Resources
Resources for Writing and Research
ESPN Go Network
CNNSI
ABC Sports
The New York Times


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